Has TFG found a home?

ChatGPT just penned a short story:

The ghost of Frank Broyles, the former University of Arkansas athletic director, floated through the walls of the athletic department building. He was in his familiar white polo shirt and khakis, the same outfit he had worn during his time as athletic director.

As he passed through the offices, he heard the chatter of the current athletic director and his staff. They were discussing the potential hire of Geoff Collins as the new defensive coordinator for the football team.

Broyles floated into the room and listened as the staff discussed Collins' credentials and his potential impact on the team. But something about Collins didn't sit right with Broyles. He remembered Collins from his time as a coach at Mississippi State, and he didn't think he was the right fit for Arkansas. In the afterlife, he knew of his reputation for clown-like antics and failures as the head coach for his alma mater, Georgia Tech.

Broyles decided to take action. He floated over to the athletic director and whispered in his ear, urging him not to hire Collins. The athletic director looked around the room, confused by the sudden chill in the air.

But he listened to the ghost's advice and decided not to hire Collins. The staff was surprised by the decision, but they trusted the judgement of their former leader.

The ghost of Frank Broyles smiled, satisfied that he had protected the University of Arkansas football team from a potentially disastrous hire. He continued to haunt the athletic department, always watching over the team he had loved in life.
 
The ghost of Frank Broyles isn’t the all seeing eye he portends to be.

“head coach for his alma mater, Georgia Tech”
 
I think it could have been worded better. “His” in this case refers to Broyles, who is a Tech alum.
It’s best not to criticize a ghost for poor phrasing. Just like Scrooge listened to Jacob Marley, I think it would be wise for Arkansas to listen to Frank Broyles.
 
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